pathetic.org :: Blue Sparks by Joe Cramer

Blue Sparks

Little blue sparks

Start, sparkle back

And forth, to and fro

Between us.

I would say so many things,

Sharing such ideas, notions,

Emotions and feelings

While still enjoying

Little blue sparks

Between us.

03/23/2007

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 03/28/07 at 02:50 AM

Nice circular poem. Starts and ends with the "little blue sparks" - very colorful. Circular like a (wedding or any other kind of) ring.
~Chelle~

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