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the exit sign reads, "CAUTION!"

by Ava Blu




03/20/2007

Posted on 03/21/2007
Copyright © 2026 Ava Blu

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Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/22/07 at 03:56 AM

Wow. Though this is definitely in the spirit of your usual work, in terms of language and voice, you really played around with a style that I usually don't see you rolling with. I think you've done it before, but certainly not very often, and certainly not as good as this.

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