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Raindrops Haiku

by Tony Whitaker

driving in the dark
diamonds dance on my windshield
headlights through the rain

03/16/2007

Author's Note: Thought this one up driving to the gym this morning in the dark as the rain poured.

Posted on 03/16/2007
Copyright © 2026 Tony Whitaker

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kimberly Bare on 03/16/07 at 12:54 PM

i enjoy those early morning rains...and this poem :)

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 03/16/07 at 04:47 PM

Great atmosphere, and the diamonds are like stars unsaid...

Posted by Alisa Js on 03/17/07 at 06:05 PM

I could so feel this one..... nicely done, indeed.. aloha

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/19/07 at 04:00 AM

From now on - I'm driving to a gym - on a morning - in the dark. As the rain pours.

Incredible.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 03/19/07 at 04:18 AM

Terrific Tony! Liquid diamonds. No tears here, just the beauty of nature. There's something magical about raindrops in the dark with lights shining on them - even when you're walking and not driving.
~Chelle~

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