Your expressions take flight upon shooting stars,
along midnight trails alight with sparkling
silver moonbeams.
You transport with vivid imagery my mind to those
sacred lovely places we hold within each of us,when things
are remarkable, when we take that one breath and can
see beyond a moment into a greater distance.
I find "when things are remarkable..." especially remarkable! A very good line, continuing to the end. The direct, clearly spoken heightened speech, simple and strong. I love that.
