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"For Sale: Baby shoes, never worn."

by Eli Skipp


I remember my art teacher, never married. I attended a Sacred Heart school then, off of Maynada and the Alhambra Circle, the one that spun every car around a pair of huge brass shoes. We shared these with our sister city, somewhere in Bolivia.

This woman would have us make sculptures using toothpicks and fingerprints and leftover packaging materials and paper plates. She hung them on the walls.

This teacher, childless, would have us make objects she subconsciously longed for, the way psychologists give themselves away in their questions. Here, in Popsicle sticks, a swing set, here, in play-dough, the lumps of a family, here, in clay and buttons and Crayola paint, baby shoes.

These days I wonder if our tiny, brazen attempts at art were her children more than anything else. How she had raised them and directed them, how they would grow with us until we had filled them with brass, until she could form them gigantic, and define cities.

06/27/2006

Author's Note: The expanded version of Hemingway's famous six-word novel.

Posted on 03/07/2007
Copyright © 2024 Eli Skipp

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jared Fladeland on 03/12/07 at 06:59 PM

wow. This was extremely powerful. I recommend the next person to read it sit down first before doing so.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/04/08 at 06:55 PM

Your words have a strong emotional impact of an adult looking back at childhood and the teacher who shaped it. In the words' simplicity, you have layered many themes, besides the emotions. I just watched Freedom Writers the other night and saw just how much influence teachers have on students' lives in shaping their future. In your poem, maybe it was a two-way street. What the teacher desired and had her students make shaped her future plus theirs. Then again, is any interaction just one way? When I read the title, I expected something much different, but what you've written has had quite an impact on my heart.
~Chelle~

Posted by Lauren Singer on 05/07/08 at 03:19 AM

absolutely beautiful. took my breath away, seriously.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/19/09 at 10:34 AM

I absoluely LOVE this piece and I agree with all the above comments. Beautiful- simply beautiful!

Posted by Mo Couts on 07/22/11 at 01:31 AM

I love what you've done on your expansion of the original work; very interesting and unique.

Posted by Jared Fladeland on 04/20/14 at 04:18 PM

I really dug this. Thank you for the write.

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