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Adoringly

by Alisa Js

won't you take my hand?
and walk a while with me
for a season or two, maybe three...

I can't promise you happiness
or make all your dreams come true
we know there are no guarantees
and that sucks, I know ...

one thing I can do
and this is a promise,
I can give of myself
pouring all over you
from this heart overflowing,
with love
adoring
and so curious ...

03/04/2007

Posted on 03/05/2007
Copyright © 2024 Alisa Js

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 03/05/07 at 06:57 AM

I agree with Gary. The opening stanza grabs you so that you can't help but read it all. Great romantic write and quite honest as well. ~JPP

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