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Snowflakes

by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau

bundled kids dance as
snowflakes target wagging tongues
melting on grins

02/14/2007

Author's Note: My entry for the Tadpole Society January/February Kukai. I think I tied for a bronze medal.

Posted on 03/04/2007
Copyright © 2024 Soulo Jacob Bourgeau

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rebecca Andre on 03/04/07 at 04:11 AM

i agree with lori. melting on smiles, such a wonderful image! =)

Posted by Alisa Js on 03/04/07 at 04:16 AM

If it were up to me, I'd give you the gold.. lol.. nicely done.. aloha.;-0

Posted by Rhonda Maneki on 03/04/07 at 06:33 AM

This reminded me of my sisters and I - during winter back home in Canada...* sweet * thank you for the revived moment in childhood before life became complicated.

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 03/05/07 at 08:08 PM

Love the idea of the snowflakes targeting for "wagging tongues"--so that's what the flurry is all about! Great sense of excitement here.

Posted by Christel Crews on 03/08/07 at 04:26 AM

what a lovely image you've painted - its been years since i've played in the snow!

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