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Laughter
by Rhonda Maneki
Laughter,
is the
tinkling
of light
though
a prism,
as it
dances
across the
atmosphere,
creating double
rainbows of
colour...
03/03/2007 Posted on 03/03/2007
Copyright © 2024 Rhonda Maneki
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 03/03/07 at 05:33 PM Sweet science, I'd say--and the double rainbows imply a lot, like laughing together, and hee hee, and ha ha. Nicely combines sight and sound,
and the effervesence of all. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/03/07 at 11:53 PM I like how you put this. Very well said indeed. |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 03/04/07 at 04:06 AM I know you know what laughter is... very well stated.. now, how about sadness? |
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