Women by Keith D Allison A fascinating mystery
upon the first paragraph
I knew
it was far beyond
my comprehension
For those who dare
Fear not
Gentlemen
for I hear it, can be breathtaking
Stirring the mind
in a world of delight
wrapped in mystery
of sweet mystifying scent 03/02/2007 Posted on 03/03/2007 Copyright © 2024 Keith D Allison
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 03/03/07 at 07:08 AM Hi Keith. At first, this appears straight-forward, even coquettish, but turns out to be sweetly sensual. Nice job! Thanks. |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/03/07 at 03:43 PM I love the first stanza, man. It's got the kind of honest approach I wish I had in my work. |
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