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Women

by Keith D Allison

 A fascinating mystery

upon the first paragraph

I knew

it was far beyond

my comprehension

 

For those who dare

Fear not

Gentlemen

for I hear it, can be breathtaking

 

Stirring the mind

in a world of delight

wrapped in mystery

of sweet mystifying scent

03/02/2007

Posted on 03/03/2007
Copyright © 2024 Keith D Allison

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 03/03/07 at 07:08 AM

Hi Keith. At first, this appears straight-forward, even coquettish, but turns out to be sweetly sensual. Nice job! Thanks.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/03/07 at 03:43 PM

I love the first stanza, man. It's got the kind of honest approach I wish I had in my work.

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