i think the repetition in this poem REALLY sets the tone and grabs the reader. i like it...and i think it sucks your thoughts all in like a big vaccuum. i am not a fan of smoking, but i feel like this poem is about so much more. negative people can be cancer...this poem has the potential to be one very powerful analogy...i think it's simplicity is beauty and once again the repetition sets the stage for making crucial points. so nicely done es. ;D

sadness. once i think i experienced a nanosecond of true nirvana when I was trying out meditation. I've been trying to achieve the feeling again ever since.

a beautifully adapted crave for sweet poison of negligence. nirvana is an interesting title for this, as you see it conditioned by whatever you want to call todays lifestyle. atleast you see it, and i admire that beauty about you.