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this is definately not the shortest distance
by Howard F Farewell spinning is more like rifling
arcing ballistic in a twisted corkscrew
finding the right angles while trying to avoid another awkward hypotenuse
twenty five percent dead still means seventy five alive
and so long as theres still one left
its enough
if only just to see blue again 02/28/2007 Author's Note: Point B isn't convenient either, jerk. - kinser
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Posted on 02/28/2007
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| Posted by Becca Kinser on 02/28/07 at 11:23 AM Okay, -this- one, I like a lot, specifically the first stanza and the last line. I don't really know what else to say other than I love it and it's early; your texts were beeping in my ear this morning. Anyway...this is going to be hard to live up to in my next one. |
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