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this isn't another love song
by Christel CrewsI don't want to write another piece
About emotions that will surely
f a d e
Like waning moons
Or stars which burst into
nothingness
Let me reach deeper
into dark caverns of
truth
Love is not an emotional roller
It's steadfast, embedded, abysmal
waters 02/20/2007 Author's Note: just a few thoughts that have been running through my mind over the past few days.. its not much
Posted on 02/28/2007
Copyright © 2024 Christel Crews
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 02/28/07 at 05:40 AM I also strive to create something profound and perhaps learn and instruct in the process. In fact, this piece is a good reminder of just that. Thanks! |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/28/07 at 06:30 AM ... and turning these thoughts into poetry, is what makes you so special. I'm so glad you posted this. Thanks. |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/28/07 at 12:23 PM it's absolutely wonderful and profound, my dear....and here, here for emotions that do not fade! |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/08/07 at 05:23 AM Christel, I am so happy for the happiness you've found and the thoughts you put here have turned into reality.
~Chelle~ |
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