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I Woke

by Joe Cramer

I woke from a deep sleep with a start.

I had been smashing plates against my heart.

My sweet slumber had been disturbed

By the voices in my head, that I had heard.

You have been on my mind

Every self same moment, all of the time.

My broken heart not spent,

It is simply bruised, and bent.

12/04/1981

Posted on 02/26/2007
Copyright © 2025 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/26/07 at 04:47 PM

Those last two lines are they great, man. Slightly expanded, I could definitely see this as a song. As it is, it's still a great poem.

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/28/07 at 03:33 AM

i, too, really like the last lines

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