| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 02/26/07 at 07:49 AM Great ending here. So simple and yet so original. I have never seen it put this way. "i miss you/i miss you with every try" --in the sense of aiming-- you've really expressed something here. Even if all else fails (and I certainly hope not)... this poem and especially that phrasing, is wonderful. I read those last two lines aloud to my husband, and he was impressed too. Really finely put. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 02/26/07 at 11:00 PM i lost myself, but i am working to find me. |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/27/07 at 03:53 AM this is one of the sweetest things i have read. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 04/23/07 at 02:40 AM this shouldn't be for me and you should delete it. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 04/27/07 at 04:52 PM i love noone |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 09/03/07 at 12:38 AM i come back and read this over and over, just so you know. every week, at least once, i read it. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 09/06/07 at 03:28 AM you keep changing the author's notes, silly man. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 05/03/08 at 08:30 AM i still read this. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 01/22/10 at 07:14 PM sigh. |
