|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 02/26/07 at 07:49 AM|
Great ending here. So simple and yet so original. I have never seen it put this way. "i miss you/i miss you with every try" --in the sense of aiming-- you've really expressed something here. Even if all else fails (and I certainly hope not)... this poem and especially that phrasing, is wonderful. I read those last two lines aloud to my husband, and he was impressed too. Really finely put.
|Posted by Ava Blu on 02/26/07 at 11:00 PM|
i lost myself, but i am working to find me.
|Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/27/07 at 03:53 AM|
this is one of the sweetest things i have read.
|Posted by Ava Blu on 04/23/07 at 02:40 AM|
this shouldn't be for me and you should delete it.
|Posted by Ava Blu on 04/27/07 at 04:52 PM|
i love noone
|Posted by Ava Blu on 09/03/07 at 12:38 AM|
i come back and read this over and over, just so you know. every week, at least once, i read it.
|Posted by Ava Blu on 09/06/07 at 03:28 AM|
you keep changing the author's notes, silly man.
|Posted by Ava Blu on 05/03/08 at 08:30 AM|
i still read this.
|Posted by Ava Blu on 01/22/10 at 07:14 PM|