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for you

by Matthew Sharp

have i lost you to the lull?
i seek for where you went just to bring you back
but you test me
then call me a failure

why are you so afraid of being alone?
it's all you've ever been
your blind hopes have frustrated you into depression
and i miss you
i miss you with every try.

02/25/2007

Author's Note: same as the day i wrote it.

Posted on 02/26/2007
Copyright © 2021 Matthew Sharp

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 02/26/07 at 07:49 AM

Great ending here. So simple and yet so original. I have never seen it put this way. "i miss you/i miss you with every try" --in the sense of aiming-- you've really expressed something here. Even if all else fails (and I certainly hope not)... this poem and especially that phrasing, is wonderful. I read those last two lines aloud to my husband, and he was impressed too. Really finely put.

Posted by Ava Blu on 02/26/07 at 11:00 PM

i lost myself, but i am working to find me.

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/27/07 at 03:53 AM

this is one of the sweetest things i have read.

Posted by Ava Blu on 04/23/07 at 02:40 AM

this shouldn't be for me and you should delete it.

Posted by Ava Blu on 04/27/07 at 04:52 PM

i love noone

Posted by Ava Blu on 09/03/07 at 12:38 AM

i come back and read this over and over, just so you know. every week, at least once, i read it.

Posted by Ava Blu on 09/06/07 at 03:28 AM

you keep changing the author's notes, silly man.

Posted by Ava Blu on 05/03/08 at 08:30 AM

i still read this.

Posted by Ava Blu on 01/22/10 at 07:14 PM

sigh.

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