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by Alisa Js

sometimes I don't understand completely
yet at other times, I think I do
what's up with a place where all is sweet talk?
where is the substance
when you need legs to stand on?

where are the warriors
when all hell breaks loose?
if we all run for cover
then what?
or turn away in shame
can we expect
to continue in faith
or slide onto lies right by eventual oblivion ...

will we meet up in ten years
or something like that,
reminising about the good ole' days
that we never did see
but hope to, one day
...

02/24/2007

Posted on 02/25/2007
Copyright © 2024 Alisa Js

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rhonda Maneki on 02/25/07 at 07:05 PM

Could this be called "Realism"..? I just love you..as is and yes, in 10 years, you and I will still be laughing. And we can look back and say *wow* the past 10 years have been pretty funky!! *soft smile* shares muh coconut.* hugs*

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