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That Dot

by Tony Whitaker



They say that life is a series of dots
each one an event that marks a spot
in the end creating a line of our life

One of these dots I remember with a smile
when this boy’s life took a sharp turn
for it dulled that which was well valued before

Foiled was the fun of feigning fist fights
playing Hide-and-Go-Seek
and Red Rover, Red Rover send Ronny right over
or bold shining knights with singlestick swords

Playing beer-can polo on make-believe mounts
or jumping over makeshift plywood ramps
are you old enough to remember those banana bikes?

And my brothers and I
in our tree house hideaway harbored
a comic book cosmos in a parentless paradise
devising pine cone grenades and rough wooden guns

I remember that day
calling over to that giggly young girl next door
“come over and look at my prize” said I
then laughing with pride as she ran off screaming
wondering why such a fuss
it was nothing more than a frog

But how I remember
on that sunny summer day
when this same silly girl and I
were on my front porch swing
chatting up our future fantasy lives
"when I grow up...” we boasted

When suddenly she bent over
and kissed me with such purpose
and without thinking I kissed her back
then as she ran off
I knew from then on- I wanted more of that

Now as I reflect on these dots in my life
And the line that each did create
That kiss was a dot that marks the spot
where my line changed direction forever

02/24/2007

Author's Note: Boy Howdy!

Posted on 02/24/2007
Copyright © 2026 Tony Whitaker

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/24/07 at 01:12 PM

delightful...absolutely delightful!

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