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You Or I
by Jeffrey Parrenthe simple difference between
you or I
and us
is the minute yet significant gap
that distinguishes
my exploration of you
and our sexploration
I had a good idea
who you were
what you liked
how you made me feel
but then it all came together
when we did
we can never go back now
and that's ok
this revelation was wanted
and now being so close
we decide our future
or look back at a past version
of you or I 02/19/2007 Posted on 02/19/2007
Copyright © 2025 Jeffrey Parren
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rhonda Maneki on 02/19/07 at 08:51 AM This feels bittersweet - like dark chocolate *loved it* |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/19/07 at 04:44 PM ...jeff, good to see your words...and was a heavy read!...at every juncture is THAT decision of which way, eh?...lovley little explanation of which way...and like frost's the "road not taken"...tis heavy, because each is muy different...eh?...good write, peace, chaz
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| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/19/07 at 09:18 PM I agree- a heavy, powerful, bittersweet read- just the way I like 'em! Great write.
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| Posted by Alisa Js on 02/25/07 at 02:26 AM reading through this one, gives one pause.. thank you for stopping by and for your kind sentiment.. aloha.;-0 |
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