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star gazing

by Janine Euladia

Standing still,
My arms hold you tight
I could stay, in this spot all night
Breathing your breath, close to your heart
Nothing .... zzzzzzzzZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
but, a mosquito could tear us apart

02/19/2007

Author's Note: Mosquitos suck

Posted on 02/19/2007
Copyright © 2026 Janine Euladia

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 02/19/07 at 08:42 PM

Skeeters sure do. Yes, this starts with a bit of romance, then the reality of life bombs in. Quite cool! Welcome to pathetic.
~Chelle~

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