| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 02/23/07 at 04:21 AM Uriel, the concept here is sad, yet you've included all 5 senses and other emotions too. Your words give one the thoughts that maybe life can be lived without believing in a God, but it might not be quite what we think it will be. With each stanza there's hope that the narrator will change his mind, but your final words crush that hope. The images are intensely rich and vivid.
~Chelle~ |