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This Stinks!!
by Alisa Jsshe smiles with her mouth in a particular way
but inside she's counting everything,
keeping score
running a tally only she can see
or so she thinks
continually auditing her inventory ...
her face may look pleasant
in a weird kind of way
but it next to impossible to hide
what's really going on inside,
to adequately cover up what she really believes ...
yet so many think they're a master at this
think they're immune
to the truth
of who they really are
it screams from the neurons,
absolute misers
trying to be kind
it's all they can do not to grab and pull back
not too smart ...
I'd rather have honesty
than shit covered lies,
flies gather 'round
this stinks!!! 02/16/2007 Posted on 02/16/2007
Copyright © 2026 Alisa Js
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rhonda Maneki on 02/16/07 at 11:27 PM Oh, my God!! I know that person!! *falls over cracking myself up*...but, I do, I do...!! I'm buying you a shovel dear, my dear, my sweet poor dear..* and a cloths pin * for you nose *..from under the freaking coconut tree - love your sister of the coconuts sisterhood and bikini underwear. xoxoxo Rhonda |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/19/07 at 05:10 PM I think we all know that person. Interesting voice, and a very nice use of a style I don't think I've seen from you too terribly often. Good stuff. |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 04/11/07 at 12:13 PM applauds! i would love to send this to a very *special* someone in my life! |
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