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Undertow

by Janine Euladia

~~~~The swell before the wave;~~~~~~
I was pulled, enveloped as the waters enfold
Although the wave has washed me unto the shores of reality
I still ride out and in on currents ~~~~~~~~your loving hold~~~~~~~~~~

02/16/2004

Author's Note: He has the undertow of an ocean. This is actually just one verse, of 5. But I like them better as separate poems

Posted on 02/16/2007
Copyright © 2026 Janine Euladia

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 02/16/07 at 11:53 AM

Very good.... I'd love to see the rest.....

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/16/07 at 12:57 PM

ditto from above...and welcome.

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