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by Rhonda Maneki






You are the sturdy solid stately oak,
I'm the colour of autumn
within your branches.

02/08/2007

Posted on 02/09/2007
Copyright © 2024 Rhonda Maneki

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alisa Js on 02/10/07 at 04:08 AM

sweet, sweet, sweet.... this one reminds me of that line from the famous song ..the one that goes something like.. "you are the wind beneath my wings'...*sigh*

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/11/07 at 07:54 PM

Great imagery. Short, sweet and to the point. Good job!

Posted by Charles M Harrison on 02/12/07 at 02:46 AM

Lovely very well done

Posted by Jennifer Ragan on 02/20/07 at 10:51 PM

I like poems like this...well done:)

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