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the confessions [ 2-7-07 ]
by Ava Blu
I submerge into the environment
to keep the shingles from swaying;
on the roof I have climbed,
just to patch some tattered belief
someone used as a lie.
02/07/2007 Posted on 02/09/2007
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/09/07 at 03:34 AM Usually, your metaphors are a little more blunt. Which works for you about 99.9% of the time. But it seems like here you went for a slightly more vague approach this time, and I really like that, too. |
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