| Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 02/09/07 at 02:19 AM i like the forceful negativity in this poem that the reader has no choice but to inhale. now, you better not smoke. anyways, i like this poem because it doesn't feel planned or designed, rather just spilled like a good painting. your angst rolls on my darling...what will you write when nutritious love re-enters your life? until then...just write what your ventricles say and your material will always be tasty. |
