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why i'm still here
by Ymelda Ramirezthat day you stepped out of the car
ready to walk away and say no more
i backed up
chased you so you'd stay
you looked down on me
PITY AGREED
i sit here and i wonder
had i been strong
had i not chased you
would we still be
i think i would have called
PITY AGREED
i'm glad i chased you
time keeps count of how long
i've had you
the next time you're ready to escape
love
will i chase you
PITY AGREED 04/21/2003 Posted on 01/29/2007
Copyright © 2024 Ymelda Ramirez
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/29/07 at 03:20 PM I like the use of the last line in each stanza. It made for a very interesting style and voice, which I think you pulled off amazingly well. Great work. |
| Posted by Gail Wolper on 01/01/13 at 05:34 AM You say yes but your poem expresses doubt. If you chose this particular refrain, it would seem that you are questioning it... |
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