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My Suicide
by Ymelda RamirezNot ignored once, but twice.
a glass of wine
And tears fall.
Always forgotten, never remembered.
a sip of wine
And tears fall.
No hugs, no kisses, no smiles.
a glass of wine
And tears fall.
Soaking in misery, wondering where it went.
a sip of wine
And tears fall.
Turn around, I won't be there.
a glass of wine
And tears fall
The candles lit, the water warm.
a glass of wine
And tears fall.
The bathtubs full, the water overflows.
the bottles empty.
The last tear falls. 01/29/2007
Posted on 01/29/2007
Copyright © 2024 Ymelda Ramirez
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/29/07 at 03:21 PM I like how you did the repetitive last line thing again, but you threw it down a little differently, and you wrapped it in a different style, too. Very well done. |
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