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there's no need to move a mountain....
by Aaron MichaelFull Title:
there's no need to move a mountain when it's scared to come between you and what you love
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the last time
you squeezed too hard
and i thought my ribs broke.
tears would've come out
any way, but
anyways
seperation is never easy
even moreso when it's
not your idea.
but we're better than the distance,
and we're stronger than time,
and mountains don't phase us at all.
the earth knows
better than to stay
between us for long.
it will make way.
it will make way. 01/24/2007 Author's Note: for love.
Posted on 01/24/2007
Copyright © 2024 Aaron Michael
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 01/27/07 at 08:41 PM it's almost lyrical in nature. i think this is a great beginning, one that could take some flesh. follow the emotion. |
| Posted by Katerina T Nix on 01/28/07 at 02:47 AM Well done, Aaron. A nice reminder that life/love is as beautiful and enduring as we make it. Well done -Kat :) |
| Posted by Melissa Panther on 08/08/08 at 03:44 AM I really enjoyed the emotion that flows through this piece, nice work. |
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