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"Levels of Sanity"

by Max Phineas

We forgot to say goodbye
Because we'd rather say "Hello"
Or "don't go."

The rose petals you scattered
Have long since disintegrated

And my mattress lies cold and shapeless
(You left, so I slept on the floor.)

Abandoned my body long ago
I was always so easy to ignore.

Paint spatters dried where we forgot
Drop cloths and rags.

And a heap wherein rests our painter's clothes-
awkwardly embraces the wall.

No masterpiece ever completed
We were struggling actors in our sick, sick
Production of love

And the curtain tore on our final bow.

Time does not reconcile with distance
And hearts do not heal with superglue,


or so I've been told.

01/22/2007

Author's Note: Mostly a stream-of-conscious thing. It's very late, you see.

Posted on 01/22/2007
Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/22/07 at 03:29 PM

I like it, especially the last line.

Posted by Erin Jones on 12/14/07 at 02:41 PM

"Abandoned my body long ago I was always so easy to ignore." These two lines are absolutely amazing. They seem to reek with emotion. I love how you've encompassed such a brilliant story in so few lines. Just amazing.

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