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sweet existence

by Peter Humphreys

the
light
drifts
a gently
casting o'er
the cat crept
floor grey shadows
of a trembling dawn
clothes passion scattered
in the night abandoned as a
clock swings tick swings tock
and on her bed breasts rise breasts
fall in time to life and lust and love
as outside that door chaos reigns an
old regime acrumbling and as she rises
dizzy dawned and combs her hair yet dark
a table rose full opens and petals fall as one
as all soft moments of remembering existence

sweet existence

01/20/2007

Posted on 01/20/2007
Copyright © 2024 Peter Humphreys

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/20/07 at 03:27 PM

Really nicely done use of style. I love how it starts out.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 01/20/07 at 10:22 PM

Hi Peter. Here is rhythm like all love should have; physically, emotionally....the rising/falling cadence of life's "sweet existance" indeed. Much enjoyed this! Thanks.

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