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Martini Lament
by Soulo Jacob Bourgeaujuniper chilled quaffs
morph lucid lips to ill fog
sapphire cruel remorse
01/17/2007
Author's Note: ** I've changed L3 from 'sapphire azure haze' to it's current composition per Leanne's sage advice (thanks). **
Posted on 01/18/2007
Copyright © 2024 Soulo Jacob Bourgeau
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 01/18/07 at 01:20 PM Um...didn't quite connect with one. But I love martini's and they have resulted in some pretty spectacular hangovers. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 01/18/07 at 07:32 PM Very nice like a soft very dry martini. Sip, sip, sip slowly the relax. Enjoyed. |
| Posted by Cristy M. on 01/20/07 at 12:58 AM leanne has the best criticism. pass it on. (good edit, by the way.) |
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