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I brought the sheets with me.
by Gabrielle L GervaisI brought the sheets with me.
I packed them up from home and brought them to this place.
I thought it would make a difference in whose memory I slept
but day after day I did not find you there.
11/28/2006 Posted on 01/18/2007
Copyright © 2024 Gabrielle L Gervais
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 01/18/07 at 12:40 PM Homesick or heartbroken? Either way, the feeling of loss is there. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/18/07 at 03:35 PM Just beautiful. Perfectly captured. |
| Posted by LK Barrett on 02/14/12 at 07:04 AM ...I know this story, every word, and in the negative space between what was wished, and what has been...fine, elegant, precise, needed. Thank you. LK |
| Posted by Vivienne Grant on 02/23/12 at 05:44 PM beautifully expressed ~ been there myself, thank you for precis-ing those feelings |
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