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whimsical girl.

by Jared Fladeland



i once knew a girl who made the world a butterfly
full of color, race, and broken shards of glass.
She envies those who could smile with a straight face
because she hurt so much inside she wished her vision
was blood and used condoms.

I once knew a girl.
And I'm grateful she's nothing but a memory.

Oh, the trappings of the whimsical girl
who ends up being nothing
but mixed up intenstines and emotions.
I'm not a surgeon, or a Mr. Fix-It.
And that's why I had to let her go.

01/15/2007

Posted on 01/16/2007
Copyright © 2024 Jared Fladeland

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Therese Elaine on 01/16/07 at 05:43 AM

This is absolutely raw...I really like it because of that gut-wrenching affect it has.

Posted by Katerina T Nix on 01/16/07 at 06:04 AM

In the end, we need we need to be our own heroes. Thank you for reminding me of that. Brilliant words. -Kat xo

Posted by Gira Bryant on 10/22/07 at 05:36 AM

Mmm. I used to be that girl.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 03/10/08 at 03:26 PM

i remember reading this a time before, but i wasn't sure how to comment, i guess because it seemed to hit pretty close to home, it still does, but a home that seems vague and distant now...

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