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Won't You Stay? by Alisa Jswon't you stay a little longer?
this time,
in this place
where dreams come true
if we let them ...
believe with me
that our time
is for us,
to realize at long last
that which we've been searching for
our entire lives ...
and now we can know
the wonder
of all we ever desired
here,
inside our love
eternal,
the way it was meant to be
you with me,
for all time ...
01/05/2007 Author's Note: for you, my inspiration ...
Posted on 01/05/2007 Copyright © 2025 Alisa Js
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 01/06/07 at 12:14 AM So who is this muse, I must wonder, that stirs you to write with such passion??? Very good. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 01/06/07 at 12:54 AM This is beautiful Alisa! Lucky the source of your inspiration. No doubt, this will warm the heart and soul of your inspiration.
"won't you stay a little longer?
this time,
in this place
where dreams come true
if we let them ...
was my favorite stanza. It reminded me of the dream I had where the man Jesus came to my house but I'd been expecting a preacher and He spent hours talking with me in the closest, most loving intimacy... beautiful stuff!
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| Posted by A. Paige White on 01/06/07 at 12:58 AM Going in my favorites. I really needed this beautiful reminder. Right now. Thank you. POTD for me and favorites bound. |
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