by David Hill
I find courage,
nothing at all.
Author's Note: A vile expulsion, and a reaction to Bergman's "Seventh Seal."
Posted on 01/04/2007
Copyright © 2023 David Hill
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Cristy M. on 01/06/07 at 02:45 AM|
i know where you're going with this because i too have written pieces inspired by "seventh seal" (it's so ripe with thought pieces and visual memories...such good fodder for ideas). however, i find that there's too much short-ness. as if you could have said more. it's good, but i would've wanted to have more to read within each line which--ironically--would have probably defeated the purpose/ intention of the brevity of it all. still, it's got lots of room and that's a bigger compliment than i could muster for most.