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A Lunatic Night
by Tony Whitaker
a lunatic night
to the edge
we ascend
guitars three
a few beers
we expend
jamming
for hours
on an old
rock song
remember
T. Rex?
Get It On (Bang a Gong)
few things
in this life
beget
such a blast
LSD
marijuana
Pink Floyd
Live
done them all
in the past
but tonight
we three
found God
in our fingers
as we cranked
on our axes
Green and Kirwan
still linger
so until
next week
as we three
play as one
let's pray
we are hallowed
as we ascend
to another
lunatic night
in the Son
01/02/2007 Author's Note: Ah, when you have one of those nights where everyone is in form! It just doesn't get any better and it pays to be thankful to the One! And I know someone will be offended by mixing religion with vices. Get over it.
Posted on 01/02/2007
Copyright © 2024 Tony Whitaker
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 01/02/07 at 11:32 AM and why should they my friend?... last time I checked.. none of us out here walk on water...lol...I think there was only One who could and did..lol.. and last time I checked.. didn't He Himself tell us... to come as you are???? if its good enough for Him..then.. that settles it... keep is real... that's what its all about...!! totally!!..alisa..;-0 |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 01/02/07 at 06:42 PM Oh yeah! Get over it, huh? hehehe... loved this. I'm far more offensive than you, believe you me. Great stuff. Encore! Encore! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 05/04/07 at 12:11 AM "Flow" is the stuff we hope for. When it happens, its sacred. A great poem came from great flow. There is nothing better. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/17/09 at 09:23 PM ...i would be a fly on the wall if i could...like three kids playing tag...wittengstein said to "work" as though it's "play" that's what ya'll did and look how it felt, i'm envious. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 11/13/11 at 05:18 PM i actually really like the mix of vices and religion, in my book they have run hand in hand for a long time. after all, isn't religion a vice for some? great write! can't argue with a night like that. |
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