| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Emily Tong on 01/01/07 at 07:52 PM wow.. i was trying to pick a line to quote, but honestly, this whole poem is amazing. i loved the opening. about the sad movies.. and tying that into a greater sadness. i was impressed that you used a few short lines to convey something much deeper than what is on the surface.. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/03/07 at 06:39 AM this conveys such great sadness in such a deep touching way, well done. |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 01/04/07 at 06:32 PM The perspective/time frame here arching from part-to present-to assuredly future-- is moving and fin the end, originally stated! "but is still
Wanted dearly for a very
Long time."--excellent.
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| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/07/07 at 05:30 AM I sense the hunger you're talking about here is the kind that can't be satisfied by food or eating. It's that intense longing for something you want, but which is beyond reach. Just recently, I was journaling about this. Hunger can drive a person to action or keep them stuck in a place where they are afraid. Welcome to pathetic. ;-)
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Junemarie Roldan on 05/23/08 at 01:30 AM So much said in so few words. Bravo! |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 11/23/08 at 05:10 PM I can most definitely relate to this one is a very personal way. Thanks for sharing. alisa |
| Posted by Rowan Luis on 08/30/10 at 10:22 AM mmhmm. heavy nodding from me |
| Posted by Angela Stevens on 06/09/11 at 09:46 PM This makes me think of people I miss dearly but I thank you for it. |
