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I wanna Cry

by William Teo

The tears
creeping slowly
across my face
I wanna cry

The sobs
choking silently
within my throat
I really wanna cry

The pain
stabbing deeply
into my heart
I really really wanna cry

The memories
gushing endlessly
before my eyes
I really really really wanna cry

The misty vision
The salty taste
The bittersweetness
I really really really really wanna cry

And so I am crying
And so I wanna cry
Misty, salty,
Bitter and sweet.

I wanna cry
Crying
O' I wanna cry
Crying

12/27/2006

Author's Note: I really wanna cry...

Posted on 12/27/2006
Copyright © 2024 William Teo

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 12/28/06 at 02:21 PM

I soooo know this! Sometimes, you just gotta' cry. I really like how the intensity increases with each stanza until it breaks down and repeats at the end...just like I do when I'm trying not to cry, but end up losing it. Well done.

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