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I wanna Cry
by William TeoThe tears
creeping slowly
across my face
I wanna cry
The sobs
choking silently
within my throat
I really wanna cry
The pain
stabbing deeply
into my heart
I really really wanna cry
The memories
gushing endlessly
before my eyes
I really really really wanna cry
The misty vision
The salty taste
The bittersweetness
I really really really really wanna cry
And so I am crying
And so I wanna cry
Misty, salty,
Bitter and sweet.
I wanna cry
Crying
O' I wanna cry
Crying
12/27/2006
Author's Note: I really wanna cry...
Posted on 12/27/2006
Copyright © 2024 William Teo
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 12/28/06 at 02:21 PM I soooo know this! Sometimes, you just gotta' cry.
I really like how the intensity increases with each stanza until it breaks down and repeats at the end...just like I do when I'm trying not to cry, but end up losing it.
Well done. |
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