pathetic.org :: To Be by Joe Cramer

To Be

Just to hold you so tightly in my arms

My heart leaps at the possibility.

Loving you so much my sweet, my heart

I pen these words of love to you so freely.

In you, my muse, I have found the love of my life.

Within your arms my heart is so full, so free.

Have I told you recently how much I love you?

Loving you is what I had forever hoped it to be.

12/20/2006

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/20/06 at 04:33 PM

I like this. But you know, I almost think you should open with that second to last line, and just keep it moving like that.

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