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Fruit
by Tony Whitaker
Fruit on the fruit tree
When its ripe its juicy.
So is the love between you and me.
Fruit on a fruit tree,
A bee in the clover
Busy making honey,
Going buzz, buzz, buzz.
Fruit on the fruit tree
When its ripe its juicy
12/16/2006
Posted on 12/16/2006
Copyright © 2025 Tony Whitaker
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/16/06 at 03:00 PM Great use of vivid, quick imagery, and I also really liked how you put this together. Great work, man. |
| Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 12/17/06 at 09:42 AM Nice images, Tony. The repetition of "fruit on the fruit tree" makes me wonder what happens when the fruit finally falls to the ground. ??? |
| Posted by Jody Pratt on 12/10/10 at 04:35 AM Such a positive poem. Yet it has such a negative undertone of the possibility of the fruit falling. |
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