by Alisa Js

Love came to me, when?
Thought I’d recognize your face,
Something in my eye…


Author's Note: Senryu 5/7/5

Posted on 12/14/2006
Copyright © 2024 Alisa Js

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/23/07 at 02:25 AM

i know senryu aren't supposed to be funny...but this one made me chuckle.

Posted by Keith McFarlane on 02/07/08 at 04:05 PM

Very nice - I suppose my interpretation is: when did I fall in love with you? I should have recognized you were I so in love. Here's an excuse - I must've had something in my eye. Only one of many possible I'm sure. Very evocative.

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