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Whilom
by Alisa Js
Love came to me, when?
Thought Id recognize your face,
Something in my eye
06/04/2006
Author's Note: Senryu 5/7/5
Posted on 12/14/2006
Copyright © 2024 Alisa Js
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/23/07 at 02:25 AM i know senryu aren't supposed to be funny...but this one made me chuckle. |
| Posted by Keith McFarlane on 02/07/08 at 04:05 PM Very nice - I suppose my interpretation is: when did I fall in love with you? I should have recognized you were I so in love. Here's an excuse - I must've had something in my eye. Only one of many possible I'm sure. Very evocative. |
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