Charming and to the point. Quite a lot of feeling contained in few very well chosen words. The details... her breast, your prospective gesture, the conept of the photo album years, vs the positive future of the last very fine line--and title, all combine to really get the idea across here.
Well Done.... Nice to see you haven't lost your touch. One gets the sense of alot left unsaid. I hope you always have a reason to carry your camera... and your pen.