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willie

by Peter Humphreys

willie the runt
would often
grunt
when things
did not
go
his way
his Mam
thought
it was all
the pig's
fault
his Da
just
thought
he was
thick
but
actually
it was
neither
each night
willie saw
the world news
and it left him
wordless


12/08/2006

Posted on 12/08/2006
Copyright © 2024 Peter Humphreys

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 12/08/06 at 12:40 PM

He had us all fool til the end... another great write P. Well done

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 12/08/06 at 03:22 PM

Willie is wise not to comment. The way you write brings the words into play so that the reader has time to absorb each thought as it comes across. Very good. smh

Posted by Jennifer Ragan on 12/09/06 at 10:12 PM

This is very clever...I really like this:)

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