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it's like a bad movie

by Delilah Coyne

i keep waiting for something to happen
something that will draw me in-
involve me

i sit there watching
hoping that
at any moment
something monumental will hold my attention
make me bite my nails
and capture me

surely the very next line
will reveal something worth hearing
something that makes all the drivel thus far
meaningful

a silent black screen
it's over
the credits roll and music plays
nothing of consequence

what a waste of time

12/04/2006

Posted on 12/04/2006
Copyright © 2020 Delilah Coyne

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 12/04/06 at 05:03 PM

I hate things that make you think... Why? What was the point? Well expressed Delilah, great write

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 12/04/06 at 06:48 PM

Unfortunately, most movies I've seen recently leave you with this feeling described here- very unsatisfied and questioning why anyone would even bother to make it. Well written- good points made.

Posted by Christel Crews on 12/04/06 at 08:17 PM

hmmm... i hate that feeling, watching and waiting for something huge to come across your path, and yet you're left with the mundane... i keep telling myself that the wait will not return void... let's hope for the positive, eh?

Posted by Katerina T Nix on 12/06/06 at 12:40 AM

I know exactly what you are talking about! Great read. Well done -Kat :)

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 12/06/06 at 02:10 AM

Yes, its always a waste when we live in an assumed time or dead.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/06/06 at 03:57 AM

This is damn good.

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