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gahzooks

by Jared Fladeland

i'm lost
like a paper foam cup
swirling about the red/white/blue waves
of an ocean

of freedom.

technique is the whore
that makes us safe
while true passion can't be contained
like pollen in the spring.

11/29/2006

Posted on 11/29/2006
Copyright © 2024 Jared Fladeland

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Katerina T Nix on 12/02/06 at 12:54 PM

Fantastic words, Jared. Well done! especially that last stanza. Wow! -Kat :)

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