|Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/29/06 at 06:16 PM|
Most delightful and moving love poem (as I saw you all your poems are love poems,) I totally understand! The sweet alluring dawn calls you as she does and that you answer with poetic greeting, heart so purely and genuinely moved. The recognition of her naked body creeping from under sheets, and out of the indigo night, and vermillion--- the movement of quiicksilver perfect, in movement and and allusions. I love the cooing as well! (Perhaps the early sound of doves...) The idea that the dawn such a voice is charming. The moment is alive for all of us as a result and moves us too!