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Separate corners of the night

by Shirin Swift

still resting on the elbows of dream-skull
i smelt her pine kernel fears widen steadily
& her body unwind from its clothes till she
was the merest transparent flutter, generative sweat,
a pungent recession in the greenest basil leaves & i reposed,
scapula-height, watchful from the thorny shade under the plum tree,
composed, punished by the pricks of an opal brooch
consciousness receding into the faded pillowcase
this crumbling trickle of dust is the brunt of heaven's fortress
she said, baptizing me with ancient sand & sturdy fingers;
She lifted my bed to the ancient pinnacles of her smile,
where I felt to the fiber-optic core the things she said,
the stealth she bore as she kept watch, herself hidden
Out bed, i call you from your very own hand, your palm
so scratched, so postbox red, to come with me,
to skim bible verses 'cross the lake –
if they skip or float or don't don't breathe,
only bring the rampant estuaries of candle wax a little closer...
we will not be lost without our bodies but more found.


I woke in separate corners of the night, my fists
two tight, Ionic curls, my forearms two pillars
on which to carry back whatever dreams i could, or rest
my forehead's husk, still resting on her elbows,
my skull a dream overgrowing.

11/22/2006

Posted on 11/23/2006
Copyright © 2024 Shirin Swift

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/23/06 at 07:18 AM

Amazing imagery. The last verse is completely unforgettable. The details feel natural and honest, not "invented" --they seem to come from fragmentary memories, but scrululously described as they were. Thus comes what might seem surreal, but actually quite as life happens--I love thinking of you as a column with your tight fists as Ionic curls--ah the poet coming to life born out of architecture. Really beautiful musical and suggestive language.

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