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Contour

by Jeffrey Parren

The despair in your face draws me in close.

I
can't
help but notice
the
contours:
your eyes,
nose,
your pursing lips.

But upon glimpsing into your past,
I realize that you are clueless,
about yourself,
about my intentions,
and all is lost.

You will relapse.
I will rejoice.
Watch as our future's past we never lived
splits into two roads,
contouring the countryside of our individual existences,
away from one another, forever.

11/16/2006

Posted on 11/16/2006
Copyright © 2025 Jeffrey Parren

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/18/06 at 02:26 AM

Poignant look at a relationship that is going nowhere. A bit sarcastic even caustic perhaps. Effectively described.

Posted by Nikki Benson on 12/23/06 at 01:37 AM

I liked this a lot... it sucks, but it's life... at least you are being realistic... :) Nice to read from you... I thought you were dead. :)

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