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dark rain
by Peter Humphreysdangerous
downward
dripping
dank
dark
drops
exhausting
elusive
eager
empty
efforts
escape
chattering
children
clowning
clapping
clawing
choking
sullen
sombre
secrets
slyly
sold
silently
11/13/2006
Author's Note: A remembering for Remembrance Day.
Posted on 11/13/2006
Copyright © 2024 Peter Humphreys
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/13/06 at 07:56 PM Reads like a hammered, hard rain falling. The impact is just excellent, Peter. Thanks. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 11/18/06 at 04:11 PM The best part of dark rain is the reflection it leaves on the pool in the end and the ripples made by your pen. |
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