|Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/16/06 at 04:04 AM
Very fine use of rhyme, and a light tender touch to a quite serious topic. I love most that without the authosr note, this becomes very enigmatic, and one can apply this to many situations, including leaving a relationship with another. I tend to like it with a sense of mystery, and more widely applied! That shows it is a really good poem.