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His Pen Fell in the Stream

by Shirin Swift

his pen fell to the stream
i went in to lift it out
but heard him murmur in his sleep
let it lay there

for the half day that it snowed,
my body prayed, grateful,
for it happened not while I slept
nor again

my soul went flying to another land,
she did not return,
except to tell me that the place was
better than here

my grave sank, my grave and I
travelled through the earth,
it was a magical ride
we went everywhere, my grave and I

10/25/2006

Posted on 10/26/2006
Copyright © 2024 Shirin Swift

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/21/06 at 07:33 AM

This is an incredibly loving and strong invocation and lament, that is how I feel it. It is one of those times when ordinary emotions and expressions must be surpassed, one must reach beyond even the exraordinary and travel to those places beyond experience and understanding. You have done that here, and I am along for this fantastic ride.

Posted by Bethany Lee on 10/05/07 at 07:51 PM

The last stanza is breathtaking...

Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/09/08 at 12:29 PM

these are all images that i've never really experienced. i like that.

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